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Kinds of Paragraphs: Winter


Using Examples (Argumentative): 

Winter is the best season of the year because you can enjoying the snow, wind, and cloudy days or do some special activities for example; going with your boyfriend, girlfriend or your family to a snow mountain and enjoy the wonderful scenery as well as skiing, taking pictures, etc and having a good company with them. In school , children enjoy the rain and take as an example to explain what is this beautiful season also make many jobs where stuck on the walls for people to appreciate them. Near the end that is September you can enjoy many festivals, one in Chile is the first governing where most people do barbecues, travel to other parts of the world, typical games where all have a great time with family. 


Sensory Details (Descriptive): 

Winter is the coldest season of the year and in my opinion one of the most beautiful of them because as for being the coldest you can share with the family and with someone special. Temperatures are fairly low and the rain that appears in some parts of the country in the form of flakes, which are beautiful. Maybe is a very off season and you cannot do much , just stay at home but the beautiful scenery of the rain , snow that you can touch it and especially for the children that can play with it or even feel it , who can be found in some parts of the world is unforgettable and wonderful. The trees that are bathed in white and the cloudy days make the day gray but really is not like that because for the most of people it’s too boring for to me cause a feeling of tranquility, reflection and harmony.


An Incident (Narrative):

Winter holidays approached, the days were cold, cloudy and sometimes rainy. My family decided to make a trip to visit my grandparents for we hadn't seen them for a while . We started the journey to the city of Concepción, would be two really wonderful weeks enjoying nature and the beautiful places in the city. We were greeted by my grandparents with many delicious things to eat; it had been a long journey. One day, we went to the skating rink with my cousins. I had never done it before. Most of the time I was on the floor, after many falls I felt that I had mastered skating, but it wasn’t like that… When I achieve my feet and take a few small steps, I tripped over a bag that was on the floor. Was the greatest shame that happened because it was not only the fall, I had slid across the track even throwing other people. My arms and legs were purple even my nose bleed but nevertheless I can say it was a memorable family vacation.



Reflection: Well, in this type of paragraphs, I can say that it wasn't very difficult. 

In the first paragraph about "Using Examples", I made some errors of commas and a little confusion with the infinitive verb and I forgot the conclusion. 

In the second paragraph about "Sensory Details", the only mistake that i made it was forgetting to put the verb "to be" in one sentence of paragraph.

And finally the last paragraph about "An Incident", i forgot to put the past perfect in a sentence of the paragraph.

After I have done this work I realized that I improve in some key points that I've been trying for months. As the use of commas, correct punctuation and especially the FANBOYS used properly. Thanks to this , I could understand the proper way to use each subject that Professor Chamorro taught us in class in detail.




Narration : Pingu's Christmas 


In a beautifull snowdays there was a lovely penguin family that were preparing for Christmas Night. The mother cooked some cookies for his family and the children were so hungry that the only thing that they wanted was eating the delicious cookies that their mother was preparing. When the mother penguin had finished her preparation the children were so anxious for eating but the cookies were so hot and they couldn't eat it. Later the penguin father arrived at the house and the kids were excited to see that he was holding a present but the father was so hungry too that he also wanted to eat the delicious cookies that his wife prepared but she did it not let him.

Then the father and the kids went to look a Christmas tree. When they had it, they began to decorate the tree and the mother who was carrying the presents , fell to the ground and his husband didn't help her, so they started to fight. The kids were sad and the parents fixed their problem and continued finishing their Christmas arrangement but it was then that the mother invites the kids to enter the house so they wouldn't see the Christmas gifts and she contains them surprisingly. They end their arrangements quietly, open the door of the house and the children run to see the beautiful decorated tree and everything ends in a good Night's Christmas.









People's Description:

Physical Description:


Tony Kakko is a vocalist of a band of power metal and he looks like a handsome real metalhead because he is slim , has a long face with small brown eyes and has a large nose. His lips are long and thin and he has a beard. Tony has shoulder length, wavy and dark brown hair. The singer usually changes his hair color and style. He has a white skin and his teeth reminds me the snow. When he smiles, wrinkles appears in the corner of his mouth.


Physhological Description:


Tony is a very outgoing and funny person obviously because he is a vocalist of a band and he needs to entertain his audience. When you see him in shows you can understand his feelings when sings and how the public pays close attention to what he sings. He is a good composer and a very emotional man ; when he writes songs also a very friendly singer; when the fans asked him for autographs or photos even though he is tired for the activities. Tony is a persistent person, very energetic and the important thing is that he always does his job seriously and loves it with passion. 





House Description:

The family is composed by six people; parents, grandparents, and two children.
They live in a big, detached; two storey houses that is painted on the outside in grey color and the left wall has a ceramic rock shape. In front of the house we can find small stairs that take you to the front door, which is decorated with flowers and some trees and it is surrounded by grass and it has a big garage on the right side.
On the first floor we have a beautiful entrance and next to it we found a small bathroom and the sitting room to welcome guests, next to it, we find a big  dining room where the family enjoy having breakfast, lunch and dinner. In front of the dining room we have the washing room. Next to the washing room and the dining room we can find the kitchen and the big living room. On the second floor we have a corridor that connects to six rooms, on the right side we have two bedrooms, those are; the marital room, where the grandparents sleep, and the big marital room that is connected with a big bathroom where the parents sleep, and between them is the resting room. If we walk on the same corridor in the middle we can see a small bathroom and on the left we can find two more bedrooms; girl’s bedroom, and boy’s bedroom.

On the first floor of the house there is a small living room with creamy, beige colored walls which connects with the dining room. Next to the white ceiling, there are two small windows, each of them half covered by a tiny, dark brown curtain. In the middle of the wall, there are two paintings that are above a white sofa decorated with four cushions. At both sides of the sofa there are two round and tiny tables with a white lamp on each one. On the right side of the table you can see a picture frame on the top section and on the section below some books on it. In the center of the room there is a round shaped coffee table with two black vases on it and in front of the sofa are two comfortable red couches that are perfect to welcome guests.

On the other side we have the dining room. It has on the left side a creamy, beige color wall and there is a picture on it, and next to the picture there is a window with a tiny, dark brown curtain. In front of the table there is another wall that has a different color, which is wine red. In front of it, there is a green plant and a picture, and between of them there is a brown cupboard. In the middle, we have a large, brown, wooden table with six chairs. On the table there is a little tablecloth and there are two chandeliers with red candles. The ceiling is white and there is a lamp hanging from it. This room is made for having a good time with the family, for example eating, having breakfast or dinner.

Next to the dining room we find the laundry. The walls of the laundry have color creamy beige also and this room has two washing machine, two white doors and has a brown furniture.

The kitchen is directly connected to the living room without any wall.

Though there is a small table with four chairs between the two rooms. On the table are some orange flowers.
Coming now to the kitchen, we can observe that in its big area stands a kitchen countertop that has a red plate with some decorative balls on it, which are white and black.
Facing the kitchen frontally, we can divide it in two sides. On the left side is the metallic shining fridge that consists of two sections. Next to it are another two cupboards with a timer, some condiments and other working tools on it.
On the right side are some more cupboards. The dishwasher is nearly in the middle of them, facing a window. We can also see some spices and bottles next to the dishwasher.
At the back of the kitchen we can find the silver-looking cocker next to some cupboards, build of an oven and a gas-cook top. Above it is a small microwave in the top shelves. At the left are two containers, made of glass. In the left, back corner we can perceive a door. Behind it is probably a larder, where you can store the alimony.
The whole kitchen is populated with many storing shelves on the top.
Entirely the kitchen transmits an organized and clean impression. The brown wood used for all the pieces of furniture harmonizes perfectly with the silver, metallic appliances and the marble boards. It is also very well illuminated by the small, round lights which are attached into the ceiling and the three armed lamp above the little table.

The big living room is located next to the kitchen, and between them there is a small wooden table with four chairs and a vase on it. This part of the house is all covered by a white carpet and has light green walls. Entering to this area, we can notice at its left part a brown wooden fireplace located between two big windows, which is surrounded by some china vases. On the fireplace there is a small plate with certain decorative balls, and above this there is a medium size plasma TV. Next to all of this, we can see a white armchair with a little cushion on it. Behind the armchair, there is a lit lamp and at its right there are two beautiful black decorations.
Now, if we turn to the right we will see a small tree next to a little wooden table with a portrait, a lamp and some books on it. Continuing, we will found two big brown couches with some striped cushions on them. They are separated by a piece of furniture with a lamp, a plant and some candles on the top of it. In the wall behind one of them are two pictures of flowers and a square mirror with golden edges. In the center of the living room there is a coffee table with two big, black, nut shaped decorations.
In general, this room has a quiet and peaceful atmosphere, ideal for doing relaxing activities like reading, watching TV, etc. or for having a nice evening talking and sharing with your family and friends.

Bathrooms… X


Out of the bathroom, you are allowed to see a corridor, the stairs and a plant next to it. Walking upstairs, the first thing that we see is a small, colorful room with white and red walls.  There’s a big window next to the bed which has a blanket, a pillow and a cuddly toy on it. In the wall, where the headboard is supported, we can see a few letters that form the name “Zack” and, near to that, a big picture of a colorful dinosaur. Beside the bed, you can see a bedside table with a lamp over it. At the feet of the bed, on the floor, there’s a box with toys in it. In the left wall that is next to the window you can see a handbag that has the shape of a green dinosaur. And finally, on the floor next to the bed, we see red ball and another pillow.



Getting out of the boy’s room, on the left, we can find the girl’s bedroom. This room has the characteristic of not having door and medium flats walls in orange with two large windows without curtains. Between of one of the windows we have a shelf in which a bag is hanging on there and for the other part a beautiful picture. Then we have a large bed with a colorful bedspread and two big pillows, between of the bed there are two small nightstands with a medium lamps and small photos. In front of the bed we have two more frames one of them it’s like a picture to put notes and next of that other small picture. You may notice a big white desk accompanied with a green chair and on the desktop there are copybooks with beautiful colors. In general this room looks very comfortable and when you enter can produce a good feeling.




This spacious room is located next to the resting room. Inside it, there is another smaller room with many hangers and brown pillows; here you can store clothes, sheets, blankets, pillows, etc. The walls are white and in one of them there is a window.


The marital room has brownish walls and a white door, there is a big window and a smaller one, and on the main wall there are pictures next to the small window. In the middle, it’s located the marital bed; on it there are a lot of pillows, it seems to be a very comfortable bed. In the corner of the room, between the windows, there is a plant and a night table with pictures and a night lamp on it. On the other side of the bed there is another night table with some books and a lamp. Next to the front door there is a wardrobe with many things on it. The floor is carpeted and it’s look to be very comfortable. The furniture of this room is made of wood and their colors are dark brown.
In general this room looks very spacious and very comfortable.




Reflection : In this part of work , I have to admit that this was a kind of difficult work for me , because at the beginning of that I didn't understand what i had to do and it was hard a to work in a huge group around 7 people at the same time. But when we were working, everything became easier and we did a good job!.

About my mistakes , in the section that i had to do, I realized that I improved about commas, punctuation . The principal focus on me was that I used that the Professor Chamorro taught me about the FANBOYS and the others subjects that we saw in classes. 




Night owl: Sweet Night


I’m a night person. I don’t like the morning because it’s boring and lazy for me. I like the night because everybody in my house go to bed early and I can take advantage of that. I stay in my room and put some music while I play video games on the computer, and I also talk with my friends too and I love it. Sometimes when I get bored with the pc, I draw and then I go to bed late but before I look out of my window to stare at moon… how beautiful it is!. Thinking about things and tomorrow will be a good day like the others and finally I’m going to the bed to sleep. 





Reflection: This was the first paragraph that we did and also I made a few simple mistakes, for example : Capital letters, the commas and i got confused with articles and the type of person that sometimes I forgot. Anyway I think that I did a normal job; not so good and not so bad .